This was a great anecdotal piece that captured what Wordsworth was telling Matthew in ‘The Tables Turned’. This experience gives audiences a perfect example of how captivating nature can be, more so than books.You have highlighted the notion of immersion into nature that I feel Wordsworth was also trying to convey. Your piece develops a sense of self-growth: from glorifying books and their knowledge to the understanding, that comes with age and experience, of the emotional impetus that nature constantly unceasingly allows for. I feel this piece could have been improved by an extension of the experiences and emotions encountered at Niagara falls.
Link to blog post: https://alinagoro.wordpress.com/2017/03/20/blog-1-week-3/